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Canned Biff

I know a man, we'll call him Biff
an independent soul, is he.
He roams the less traveled paths,
and beds down under a tree.
He's not afriad to speak his mind,
or pray on a bended knee.

He'll search for just the perfect words
leaving you not much to  say.
Eating as little as the birds,
wearing clothes in the style of "fray".
Aluminum cans & copper
are his quest from day to day.

Sensitive in nature,
yet pragmatic in his thoughts,
the desert breeze puts on the squeeze,
tying most men's souls in knots.
With weather, his lone companion,
he connects the dots to dots.

He has no need for protocol,
his itinerary's few;
some days, time beats for him, alone...
leaving him, not much to do.
But, mostly he's a servant
to his jaded point of view.

You probably won't notice him
as he roams from place, to place;
his gaze evades judgemental eyes,
but, he'll look you in your face...
..and give you your own flowers,
he picked, and arranged in your own  vase.

Not necessarily a loner,
but, always living on the go,
the wealth he owns, is measured not...
..in increments you'd know.
For he is free of most the chains
that binds the status quo.

— docmaverick, Jan 27, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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poewriter58

18 years 4 months ago

says it all

Your poem is excellent, I would suggest a different title though it is deserving of something more grasping. I have know people like this that have come across my path from time to time your last stanza says it all that brings the entire poem into focus and drives it home
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frangipangi

18 years 4 months ago

excellent

This poem is absolutly beautiful, in form, concept, flow and rhthym. perfection. You are a master word smith. I am elated, I am humbled. Thank you. Yours, Frangipangi