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Jan 28, 2008
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haiku
babies watching me
with breath held in wonderment
I behold them too
Comments
weirdelf
18 years 3 months ago
the last line needs more oomph
frangipangi
18 years 3 months ago
Oomph it shall be!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 3 months ago
Let me know when you wrangle that verse please.
frangipangi
18 years 3 months ago
wrangle
weirdelf
17 years 10 months ago
I retract my original comment, must have been in a cynical mood.