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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jan 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fitting in

Among friends

I am a small hand

Inside a large glove


Artistically incline

I see the world

Not as others do

Making friends

Like sunrise and sunset

I ride the moon

— Barbara Writes, Jan 25, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

I see the world not as

I see the world not as others do. I can relate to this very closely. I like the way you have expressed so much in so few lines. Nice work. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

Planet me is a great place

Planet me is a great place to be. lol - I sometimes feel like that too. Most of us do methinks! Nice work :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 4 months ago

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So short and yet beautiful, It took me there, Nicely written
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Ancientone

18 years 4 months ago

Nice, unlike....

the anger I see in much of your poetry. Keep your spirit like this, please, anger suits no one, but s*** does happen I know. This poem reflects an inner beauty nicely. We all see things through our own prism on the world, that is fo sure. There is your truth, my truth and the real, honest truth. Keepw writing like this more. :) Patrick/AO
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 4 months ago

thanks for you insight

I am amgry often than not. Expressing in words is the only way to to carry away from me. I annoy people this is probably what they see evem when I think I'm positive. Really appreciate your you honesty.