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I Am

i'm deep
inside
were its
moist
warm

and i'm safe
here
in my
kingdom
i am king

(C)2008
Lenny Gazbowski

— Lenny of Cohen, Jan 23, 2008

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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

The gods are smiling - I am

The gods are smiling - I am sure. This is great - it took me somewhere deep inside and made me tingle. :-) Nice work. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
LC

Lenny of Cohen

18 years 4 months ago

Danku

well Kaz! Thats Flemish for, well you already know! Appreciate your comments Kaz, and hope you are doing well. Lenny x
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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

I am

Very well my friend! Its good to see you writing more! I hope you are well too! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.