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Down at Devil "s" Lake
Down at Devils Lake in the summer of eighty-two
I swam with a vision, and found my soul on another's shore
You and I swam naked in a hidden swimming hole known now to me, as the
" Cove of Lost Souls"
Thick under brush, overgrown trees, and shrubs
Well hidden from prying eyes, ours met and locked, to our shock and surprise
You on your shore and I on mine
Somehow we meet there in the middle, of this bottomless hole
We were surrounded in obscure blue and lit by pale blue moonlight
You were amazing, and swam like a fish
Speaking endless phrases for and to me, without using your lips
Know, now that it is me, that I sing your praises
You held me so tight, I could barely breathe
Another breath, I had no care to take, in those, our last hours, down at that lake
I still wonder; if I was meant to leave this pool of deceptions
What strange forces brought us together and then tore us apart
I was awakened on my side of the cove, forever changed
A half eaten salmon lay by my side
A playful Black bear cub, kissing my face
What in this strange world, had taken place?
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
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Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 4 months ago
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