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An empty feeling awaits each awakening day
as dawn peaks her weary head over the horizon
touching the early morning sky with licks of pink and yellow
a little blue peaks between the clouds
She is reminded once again that the comforting feeling
that sleep had provided her with for that fleeting moment in time
is gone, ripped away cruelly by the realization of a new day
be this ever so brutal, in a sick way it seem so sublime
She is now left defenceless to the preying eyes of daylight
the eyes that see all, and miss none of the indiscretions committed
they say the eyes are the windows to the soul, then why she wonders
are these eyes so black, and souless
though she may appear defenceless and weak to these prying eyes
deep within her there lies an inner strength few in her lifftime will break
a stoic presence is what she provides to those who surround her,
when the chips are down who provides her with this same pillar of strength?
This is the eternal question constantly asekd by the lonely
if they ever do find resolution, its anyone's guess
she never has, never will but permanently lives in hope that one day
she can find this without having to practice defiant duress.
Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 4 months ago
Feebie This catches the very theme