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Cemetery Road

I drove along Cemetery Road this morning

just like so many other mornings

and saw faded silk flowers

caught within the black iron of the gate

having been carried there

by that odd southern January wind

that had gusted up till dawn

Those flowers reminded me of so many lost souls

lingering about their graves like shadows

faded and trapped, while desperately seeking salvation

if only someone would offer them abetment

Yet I drove without stopping, preoccupied by thoughts

of hot coffee and numerous chores at home

ignoring the intuition that my dreams tonight

would be haunted by faded silk flowers in black iron gates

and souls that had longingly watched with baleful eyes as I passed

all knowing full well I had seen them

— RSScheerer, Jan 17, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Near Springfield, Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Edgar Allen Poe, Merrit Malloy

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fthillsboomer

18 years 3 months ago

Now you've done it

after reading this I wrote a poem without rhyme, I am still suffering from the withdrawal symptoms.
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fthillsboomer

18 years 3 months ago

Yes it would and

you can read mine as well. It's listed on the site as 'I wonder"
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Calliope

18 years 4 months ago

This spoke to me

I've had many similar experiences.This was wonderfully written,the flow, the images, the title ,all work well together. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 3 months ago

Wow!

What a haunting poem with sizeable impact! Very classy! Cat
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 3 months ago

I can only imagine

..what symptoms those might be! You poor thing! *laughs* Will it alleviate some of the withdrawal if I promise to post one of the few I have that do rhyme? In the meantime, I would very much like to read the one which is causing you so much pain! ~ Ronda
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 3 months ago

I shall

find and read it right now! I also realized that one of my pieces containing rhyme is posted here. No promises, but there it is, entitled "Requiem." ~ Ronda
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 3 months ago

hi, Cat!

A belated welcome to Neo! Thank you so much for your kind words. This poem is a revamp of one that appeared over at Poets, and I'm much more comfortable with this version. I have always valued your opinion - nothing's change there! ~ Ronda
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j_h08

18 years 4 months ago

This is very strong.

This is very strong. Writing out the thoughts that one does have sometimes as they pass any cemetary. Congradulations on getting it published as well.
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pinksheep

18 years 4 months ago

Cemetry Road

I like the line lingering etc . I feel lines 11 12 and13 are a little lacklustre.And yet this is very good work . Lesley
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 4 months ago

The saying Cemeteries are for the living

comes to mind after I read this poem... when I have slept behind cemeteries and in cemeteries I watch my step around heads yet I never feel souls like I do at the care homes to me Care homes are more depressive/reflective then cemeteries are.Thadeophilia(sic)a fondness for cemeteries.The way this poem is written is perhaps a commeon feel as J has said Congrates on the publish.Conect11 has a few poems regarding cemeteries as well. Did you know that children who field trip to cemeteries are more likely to have a smoother morning for a loved one themn a child that attends a funral without previos exposer to one...? In ink, Dabbler
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

thank you, David

As much as I love old cemeteries, I have organised my will to avoid being buried in any cemetery. They are for the living. I tell my family that I will never be there, as I have no intention of spending any of my time beneath the earth. This poem originated from the sight of those flowers. All of the people who had come and left them ... and there they were, lost in the wind. ~ Ronda
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 4 months ago

likewise Ronda

I just want to be buried without a coffin in the bush and a tree planted on top, but I think it's against the law in most places. Love the poem, it brings the mundane and the dead together as they should be. cheers, Jess
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poewriter58

18 years 4 months ago

cemetery road

, The imagery is outstanding in this poem, the title is quite common I would have selected something more eye catching as this is the first thing your reader will see, content of poem was excellent.
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

thank you

The original title was "Cemetery Flowers," but the editor preferred "Cemetery Road." I think it fits in a way. Thank you for your input. I always appreciate ideas and suggestions! ~ Ronda
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meic

18 years 4 months ago

Beautifully written - the

Beautifully written - the symbolism of the abandoned silk flowers and the melancholy hints of discarded psyches chime off each other like funeral bells. The mundane domestic references ground the piece and make it real, so that it is in the end more a tribute to the living than to the dead. Thanks for sharing. It deserved to be published. Iechyd da [Good Health - Welsh] Mike
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

Thank you

It is extremely satisfying to have your work not only appreciated but understood as well. Thank you for being such a perceptive reader, Mike. ~ Ronda
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 4 months ago

Cemetery Road

Hi, just getting caught up on some reading and happened upon this gem I liked the imagery. Odd things can really catch our attention as they should!
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

thank you

I appreciate your comments. Odd things seem to always catch my attention - that's a problem sometimes! ~ Ronda
dbaker

dbaker

18 years 4 months ago

Your Poem

After reading through the various reply's and postings in regards to this piece, I don't have anything new to say about it...other than wow. Imagery is absolutely spot on. I was there with you in this piece. Thank you for posting it. -DS Baker
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

my thanks

Your comments and opinion are appreciated. ~ Ronda
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 4 months ago

Hi ronda...

This is an excellent piece and deserves recognition...gave me the chilly's.. I love it when a poem does that to me. Usually it is a song that does it. Very nice....
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

thank you, moonman

Chills are a good thing -- as long as they aren't from 12" of snow. (currently buried here, so it's difficult to avoid the analogy!) ~ Ronda
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Ronda

Your piece is both compelling and well writen. Cemetaries are surely for the living. I even visit my mom once in a while just to talk. Yeah, it's morbid. BTW, odd that I got through uploading my new avatar I made in Bryce and came in to read. Kinda strange. eeeooooieee. *G* Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Hi, Rett

Thanks for reading and giving me your opinion on this piece. It's not morbid that you visit the cemetery to talk to your mom. You're part of the larger population of those who do ... I, on the other hand, used to love cemeteries for their peace and the history they held. Now I can't stand the thought of being buried in one! lol ... I can hear that eeeooooieee in my head ~ Ronda
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cricket

17 years 11 months ago

Ronda

Just recently I drove through a cemetary and noticed all the flowers still there.. so this piece brought that imagery to life for me. indeed a tribute to the living not the dead in the end.. so often while visiting the graves of my parents I have felt a presence. souls that had longingly watched with baleful eyes as I passed. how true these lines are if only one can feel and see.. well written ... the symbolism of the abandoned silk flowers really brought so much out in this piece.. BrownEyesBlue
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Thank you

... for your great insight on this piece. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to read. Best, Ronda