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Jan 17, 2008
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Cemetery Road
I drove along Cemetery Road this morning
just like so many other mornings
and saw faded silk flowers
caught within the black iron of the gate
having been carried there
by that odd southern January wind
that had gusted up till dawn
Those flowers reminded me of so many lost souls
lingering about their graves like shadows
faded and trapped, while desperately seeking salvation
if only someone would offer them abetment
Yet I drove without stopping, preoccupied by thoughts
of hot coffee and numerous chores at home
ignoring the intuition that my dreams tonight
would be haunted by faded silk flowers in black iron gates
and souls that had longingly watched with baleful eyes as I passed
all knowing full well I had seen them
— RSScheerer, Jan 17, 2008
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fthillsboomer
18 years 3 months ago
Now you've done it
fthillsboomer
18 years 3 months ago
Yes it would and
Calliope
18 years 4 months ago
This spoke to me
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
once again
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Wow!
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
I can only imagine
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
I shall
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
hi, Cat!
j_h08
18 years 4 months ago
This is very strong.
pinksheep
18 years 4 months ago
Cemetry Road
IKnowNoBox
18 years 4 months ago
The saying Cemeteries are for the living
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
thank you, David
weirdelf
18 years 4 months ago
likewise Ronda
poewriter58
18 years 4 months ago
cemetery road
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
thank you
meic
18 years 4 months ago
Beautifully written - the
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
Thank you
Barbara Writes
18 years 4 months ago
Nicely written
Janice Pearce
18 years 4 months ago
Cemetery Road
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
thank you
dbaker
18 years 4 months ago
Your Poem
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
my thanks
themoonman
18 years 4 months ago
Hi ronda...
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
thank you, moonman
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Ronda
RSScheerer
17 years 11 months ago
Hi, Rett
cricket
17 years 11 months ago
Ronda
RSScheerer
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you