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Jan 20, 2008
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(An excerpt from) THE MAN
The sun was hot, very hot. The man squinted against that hell son, sweated and staggered wide legged under the oppressive heat. He had something in his hand, his voice a low growl, talking to whatever it was. He was babbling to himself an indecipherable language of sorts, stumbling willynilly ,slobbering, squinting and gibbering all the while turning the objects over and over in his filthy hands. The man’s hair hung like wet, dirty strings in front of his face. He was going to die and he knew that, so he breathed something through ragged rotten teeth, maybe a prayer, maybe a curse what he mumbled in that gravely drone. Some remnants he heard once in a church in an almost forgotten town somewhere in his damned and hellish life. Nevertheless he mumbled on feverishly.
Comments
IKnowNoBox
18 years 3 months ago
Some times when I read real good stories
frangipangi
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Box!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 3 months ago
How far along are you on this ...is it a novella I noticed the
frangipangi
18 years 3 months ago
how far?
weirdelf
17 years 10 months ago
Again I want more.
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
and like the others...