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The Mechanical Bird
Its bright cellophane wings, blue, yellow, and deep brown
Its plastic parts and rubber band heart;
The way that it was wound
Up in front of its beck, with a little crank handle
Its mechanical thump and its pump
It flapped as if it was going to break in two but, yet it rose up into
The skies every time
Every time It did rise
It danced upon the wind as if it was fleeing from sin
As it lifted its weary plastic body up and out of my hand
Gracefully into the evening air
As if it were real and without care
With every thump and pump of
Its mechanical heart and every turn of its wheels
It rose to the feat at hand
and
It flew all the higher with every pulse
It rose to the occasion of flight that night
It flew as if it was on its way to the moon
Then suddenly the wings folded in
Onto the neighbor's roof top with a thump
TV and Cb antennas it did miss and
It came to rest behind the smoking chimney
With all the rest and the best; of our stuff
Johnny's Boom A Rang
Timmy's autographed baseball by none other than the Babe!
Sally's Blue Bird Kite the one her Grandmother made for her
and
Now my wind up toy, that actually flew, too
I know, I'll never find another
What evil did the neighbor's roof top possess?
That it would and that it could
Claim all that we had and held so dear
Why would it gobble up our prized possions?
Leaving us in tears wondering and plotting when
In our revenge, we would claim our objects of delight again
Away from us, in this its, mountainous regions; they lie
Fiercely grasped now, with the December's snows
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
Critiques
Kieran Nelson
18 years 4 months ago
Nice idea
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 4 months ago
Yea some of these last post are works in progress