Notional Extremist

This is strong, the use of government actions as metaphors is really well done. The most unfortunate mineral on the planet is cobalt, it makes any color shine but is also used to line missles. Now to have the smartest, most efficient computers on the planet sit on missles still amazes me, instead of improving the human condition they are used to trim it down.

But I hear there is a hospital already tagging new borns and this is a scary Ideal to me for one is no longer free when he is tagged I think a great Ideal for little ones it is as long as it can be taking out later in life The Day is comming when all will be tracked by some one or something a God like premiss to be able to be found when not wanting to be found It has its benifits and its curses as do all great invetions and Ideals Donnie/ Sinbad

I love succinct, direct statements that make an impact. To evoke an emotional response in 33(?) words is an accomplishment. The style of punctuation and capitalization fits so well. It leaves me feeling as uneasy as the entire piece. Well done.