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The Marlboro Man

I was just seven and respected everyone  so; or else

This is when I began to agree with the distinguished cowboy guy

In that I wanted to be like him; or the Mr. Clean guy

But, remember now; I was only seven; I didn't look so good with a short crew cut

So Mr. Clean was out; big ears you know; so that ideal had to go

But, that cowboy guy sitting high on that hill; on his wild stead

In the saddle high, hat tip to one side, rope in hand, the other on the horn

Puffing that old cigarette; how cool was that?

I thought; this guy is though, I want to be like that

So I started to puff, I stoled Camels at first  then Mom's Moores

Because,  they looked like little cigars; I thought they were cool

I hacked and coughed at first; was not long till I could blow smoke rings

and flip them into my mouth from out of my hand

I was cool and not even eight

Man

My buddy Phil what a pill he could blow smoke out of his ears

Oh but, I got caught and was forced to quit the old fashion way

Three packs in a row; God did I get sick, I didn't care much for that guy who caught me; Although

I should be thankful I guess?

See I stopped; but, Mom and Phil did not

They are gone now, and so are five others, all to those damn old cigarettes

That cowboy guy who would have guessed;  he was really the "Grim Reaper"

Dress like that, I still think he is cool but, I think so is the Grim Reaper

He is cool today; since he put his cigarettes away

 

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

 

— Sinbadthesailorman, Jan 14, 2008

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 4 months ago

I typed this up for my twevle yr. daughter

she has got caught and I told here its your life do what you can with it but, it is Moms right to correct you for it's is against the law weather you think so or not but she is a hard head and is not buying the bag of shit so I try influnanceing her with the deaths of her grandmother and great grandmother and uncles and aunts just a few years ago But Mom and Jeramy smoke so did I So why did you quit Because I got caught and you all ready have health issues with your diabetees you need all of your cirulation working correctly or they start cutting things off like your toes I don't know weather she believes me or not but I was never a one to buy that old prhase Do as I say and Not As I do so hopefully she make the right choice I know her Mom will inforce what she can but two stones clickin can start a awfully big fire And My daughter has even a harder head then her Mom Donnie/Sinbad