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Lenny of Cohen
Jan 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Beyond

In sadness
you can find beauty
after you've
been baptised
                     in the pain
you seek
to escape from
their then comes joy

Lenny Gazbowski(C)2008

— Lenny of Cohen, Jan 13, 2008

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RSScheerer

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18 years 4 months ago

You lost me

at the end. I'm not sure if there is spelling error there or if it's a lack of comprehension on my part. Yet another strong beginning to a poem that doesn't seem to complete itself. I'd need some further explanation on this one before I offered any suggestions. Or you could tell me to shut the hell up. :) ~ Ronda