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IKnowNoBox
Jan 12, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Ore Born Installation

born from ore

smelt into existence

structural awards

plates etched with honors

metal upon stones

daring entropy

to erase

memories

 

— IKnowNoBox, Jan 12, 2008

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 4 months ago

Ore Born Installation

I read this over and over and understand the concept, except "to erase memories "can you let me know, I guess my mind isn't capable of grasping the depth of this nice piece
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 4 months ago

Great call Janice

Erosion of a plaque of memorial etched metal,I like where Moon Man went but for I think it needs to go back to the draft table as well the votes really reflect my ideas clarity. Great insight both of you. In ink, Dabbler
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 4 months ago

If not for the disorder,

If not for the disorder, there would be no us, and so on and so on... I like it when I have to think about it..I have been known to get it wrong...did I?