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the consequence of ice
Part I
I have stood within your perennial shadow
heard the rustling of seasons in your leaves
as you have withstood years of frenzied winds
hail and rain have both had their ways with you
and your limbs have worn the silent beauty of pristine snow
through all of this you have persisted stable and sure
earning my love for your beauty and respect for your strength
until you finally met a force stronger than your own
Part II
that day that the rains came and the temperatures fell
you bowed down to the elements as if begging them for mercy
as they heartlessly tested your endurance with great leverage
(for ice is truly beauty without mercy and weight without relief)
the first tour bent your limbs until they touched the ground
encumbered weakened and weary but mostly unbroken
you managed to survive that storm relatively unscathed
another round was more than your waning integrity could bear
throughout that long night and into the next morning
when the sun caught the ice like crystal in its rays
feigning brilliance as it afflicted you once more
from the window I watched helpless with dismal regret
when the ice stopped I stood witness to the damage
beholding a world held captive beneath an eerie landscape
that was at once beautiful and haunting in its destruction
the screams of other trees assaulted my ears as they fell beneath their burdens
and there you stood before me so broken and maimed that I cried
you fought bravely and bore your wounds as proudly as you could
we stood their grieving together over the evidence of a fierce battle
your limbs rent from your body and scattered upon the frozen earth
fallen soldiers unable to withstand their second frigid war
when the ice finally cleared and your burden decreased
you remained proud despite the injuries inflicted upon you
two days later as we pulled each lost branch away
I empathized with your soundless lament
my eyes cast to the task to allow you your dignity
quietly whispering promises of spring and warmth
when buds will become the leaves of summer
and I will stand within your shadow
so that perhaps you may feel whole again
Critiques
orgami
18 years 4 months ago
metropolis forest
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
thank you
meic
18 years 4 months ago
I could see your posting problems when I first visited.
Janice Pearce
18 years 4 months ago
Ice
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
thank you, Janice
Calliope
18 years 4 months ago
This was...
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
It was a difficult choice