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the consequence of ice

 

Part I

I have stood within your perennial shadow

heard the rustling of seasons in your leaves

as you have withstood years of frenzied winds

hail and rain have both had their ways with you

and your limbs have worn the silent beauty of pristine snow

through all of this you have persisted stable and sure

earning my love for your beauty and respect for your strength

until you finally met a force stronger than your own

 

Part II

that day that the rains came and the temperatures fell

you bowed down to the elements as if begging them for mercy

as they heartlessly tested your endurance with great leverage

(for ice is truly beauty without mercy and weight without relief)

the first tour bent your limbs until they touched the ground

encumbered weakened and weary but mostly unbroken

you managed to survive that storm relatively unscathed

   

another round was more than your waning integrity could bear

throughout that long night and into the next morning

when the sun caught the ice like crystal in its rays

feigning brilliance as it afflicted you once more

from the window I watched helpless with dismal regret

when the ice stopped I stood witness to the damage

beholding a world held captive beneath an eerie landscape

that was at once beautiful and haunting in its destruction

the screams of other trees assaulted my ears as they fell beneath their burdens

and there you stood before me so broken and maimed that I cried

 

you fought bravely and bore your wounds as proudly as you could

we stood their grieving together over the evidence of a fierce battle

your limbs rent from your body and scattered upon the frozen earth

fallen soldiers unable to withstand their second frigid war 

 

when the ice finally cleared and your burden decreased

you remained proud despite the injuries inflicted upon you

two days later as we pulled each lost branch away

I empathized with your soundless lament

my eyes cast to the task to allow you your dignity

quietly whispering promises of spring and warmth

when buds will become the leaves of summer

and I will stand within your shadow 

so that perhaps you may feel whole again

— RSScheerer, Jan 11, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Near Springfield, Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Edgar Allen Poe, Merrit Malloy

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orgami

18 years 4 months ago

metropolis forest

i re read this three times fascinated by viewing this occurence through a different perspective of thought i love other poets here who i relate too but sometimes as this one time i find an experience that is truly an event thank you O
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

thank you

For some reason I had technical problems when posting this and nearly gave up. Last year we had two ice storms within three weeks of one another. It was chaotic beauty; the trees were so beautiful trapped within their crystal prison. Standing outside and listening to them snap from miles around was the worst. We lost most of two of our trees in the front yard. It's amazing that they survived at all. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Makes all of the effort in posting it worth the trouble. ~ Ronda
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meic

18 years 4 months ago

I could see your posting problems when I first visited.

I'm so pleased you managed to post it properly - a truly gripping read. I was totally persuaded to follow the fortunes of these hapless beings. Your words made me care. It's odd how trees have this power to affect us, teach us lessons and philosophies and engage our emotions. Almost as though they are long-lost kin. You have breathed new life with your poem and given a whisper of hope. Lovely work. Mike Me: 30s
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 4 months ago

Ice

Loved the title I could relate to this I had a Redbud tree cast to the ground during a storm and I cried! But lo and behold the root system was so strong it came back, first as shoots and today it is as beautiful as before.Nicely written!
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

thank you, Janice

It's amazing. The trees still bear scars but they bud and burst into life the spring immediately following those storms. I'll never forget the sound of those branches breaking for miles all around me. ~ Ronda
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Calliope

18 years 4 months ago

This was...

...gripping and engaging.totally sucked me in.I loved this peice. Beautiful! Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

It was a difficult choice

Was the ice beautiful or destructive? Of course it was both. Perhaps you cannot have one without appreciating the other. ~ Ronda