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Woken Down

gravel as a bed

satin to a vodka straight drunk

loose at the limbs faded-out

what could pass for asleep

that wisp of urine about

double vertigo crawl space

away far enough for a hobo

with apprentice in tow

half spirited still

from that first round

Nothing in the numbness

just as there was a shake

a hand upon an ankle

a week practiced concerned tug

as it stirred the apprentice

slouched upright (nearly)

to a bellow...

"I Sleep In The Cracks..

Of Civilization!"

"What is your talent?"

now there was no

immediate answer

to that quick question

however there was

a concern that will

never be seen again

 

— IKnowNoBox, Jan 09, 2008

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 5 months ago

Woken Down

I Know No Box has insight to the perils of the homeless! Really enjoyed this It's something we don't want to think about in our warm houses eh? Nicely done
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orgami

18 years 5 months ago

weathern kin

loved this peice like the tattered and golden threads that spin the tale O
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 5 months ago

To Drink With

is to finish with That one not drink more then their share where there is space habitate That one may be away for their sleep when one is down awkwardly thumbs up check is mandatory procedure Down maybe.... out never! Thank you O' In ink, dabbler
JF

Jaffa Forbes

18 years 5 months ago

Really nice stuff; beautiful

Really nice stuff; beautiful rhyme and rhythm. Good imagery and clear choice of words. A pleasure to read! Jaff :)
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 5 months ago

thank you Jaff

George Orwells Down and out in Paris and London Gave my the Wonder lust among other writers and once one gets past the expectations and the cast there is something there I am stoked that it translates well to the beauty of the moment.Sadly I forgot that Hobos Name,but I remember his Talent.What are we without Talent....? In ink, Dabbler