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Jan 09, 2008
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Woken Down
gravel as a bed
satin to a vodka straight drunk
loose at the limbs faded-out
what could pass for asleep
that wisp of urine about
double vertigo crawl space
away far enough for a hobo
with apprentice in tow
half spirited still
from that first round
Nothing in the numbness
just as there was a shake
a hand upon an ankle
a week practiced concerned tug
as it stirred the apprentice
slouched upright (nearly)
to a bellow...
"I Sleep In The Cracks..
Of Civilization!"
"What is your talent?"
now there was no
immediate answer
to that quick question
however there was
a concern that will
never be seen again
— IKnowNoBox, Jan 09, 2008
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Critiques
Janice Pearce
18 years 5 months ago
Woken Down
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
Thank you Janice For your Comment.
orgami
18 years 5 months ago
weathern kin
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
To Drink With
Jaffa Forbes
18 years 5 months ago
Really nice stuff; beautiful
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
thank you Jaff