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Jan 07, 2008
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I've tasted of a nectar so sweet
as to rinse away all pain,
and leave the pallette satisfied.
I've never known great fortune
but it would pale in it's gloss...
..next to your smile.
Aromas exist that can cause the heart to soar
in anticipation of their treat,
and with a solitairy heart...
..I can greet the splendor of the dawn,
and not feel alone...
..if I could see your smile.
Picture the song that speaks pure joy,
the tune that both haunts and completes you;
and you will know my bliss.
For in all the Universe,
I'd need nothing at all...
..when I'm allowed your smile.
— docmaverick, Jan 07, 2008
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