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little eater

sometimes I think of burning
paperboats  

you would never sail

girlhood was with you
was with sandals
in the mud after the rain

and now the pain of watching you
you with no yesterday.

take everything as fuel
burning down hills,
trees,

the clover we'd pick
you made it a flower
to me.

there is no stop

there are only the times I remember.


— whitetea, Jan 07, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Chrystos, Mark Strand, Adrienne Rich, Naomi Shihab Nye, Rachel M. Simon, Donald Justice, Mary Oliver, Nikki Giovanni, Alice Walker, Bukowski, Mary Lambert

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Mark

Mark

18 years 5 months ago

You Poem

Your poem captivates me. I read it over and over. Your voice I have not heard before. Sweet,innocent and mystical. Truly an experience. Mark
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

whitetea

This was awesome!! I have a suggestion that you can take or leave I am no expert and I hate to critque but her goes: "girlhood was with you was with sandals" ["was" twice throws me a little] It is, as I said an awesome write~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers