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LC
Lenny of Cohen
Jan 06, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

sex amps off

the starched mental
curtains groan and twitch
as the nurse rides
the doctor like a horny bitch
and all the sexual dysfunctionals
are out in arms
well they would be
but they have none
as they are all amputees
as well so can I
welcome you to
their physical
and mental hell

— Lenny of Cohen, Jan 06, 2008

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purplemoondoll

18 years 5 months ago

Its good to see you writing

Its good to see you writing my friend :-) This packs a heck of a punch - it blew me away. Raw,in your face and screaming injustice with every line. WOW! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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Lenny of Cohen

18 years 5 months ago

Very Kind

of you Kaz! I appreciate, as always, your comments. More to follow.......hic.....morphine please nurse!!! Lenny
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

sent here

Rumour told me that I should come by and read your work. It is definitely worth it! This is flat-out grit. I'm glad I stopped in! ~ Ronda
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Lenny of Cohen

18 years 5 months ago

Rhonda

I am blushing! Appreciate your kind words! More newies will follow. Lenny
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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 5 months ago

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intresting