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IKnowNoBox
Jan 05, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Pick yer' Pony

some  prance

others chomp bit

one or two buck

load bearers

race winners

called to post

attached to plow

pick a pony

feed it oats

until it glows

in the spotlight

 

— IKnowNoBox, Jan 05, 2008

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 5 months ago

Thank You

This is a call to nominate poems to run for the spotlight.To involve the readers to support your poems of interest.Also to help those who seek the spotlight to exerise their ponies to run.Glad you liked it. In ink, Dabbler
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purplemoondoll

18 years 5 months ago

Second that call

Nicely done Dabbler So you get 5 from me too:-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

Nicely done!

Leave it to you and your staccato verbiage to say it so well! And so 5 oats for you my friend! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

hehe...

damn my drifting mind lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

haha

you know people are begining to think me crazy laughing at a screen lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie