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She

She came out of the fog

and the wind was at her back...and in my face.

And it was she...

 

..and my tears started at the sight of her,

she looked through me, but I saw her.

My tears weren't only wet from the cold.

 

She mingled with others...

..but, had I not answered the door...

..this beautiful creature wouldn't know me from adam.

 

After a pass of time, she's not mine.

She belongs to herself, and I deserve her, not.

For she was a diamond...and much too much for me.

 

Something to cherish, but not to cling to...

..is, she made my night, by being my night and day.

And she was...

 

...her. Not because she could ever love me...

..but, because she cared,

for my welfare In a perfect world, she'd always share.

 

Oh the glory of having a lover.

One that cares, one like her...

..one like "she".

— docmaverick, Jan 05, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 5 months ago

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this poem is my new all time fav.... ~RealTears
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years ago

I love this

Smiles:) Barbara I won't crit, just BEAUTIFUL I have no words to describe this. I read this three time slowly back to back and with pauses, it just gets better with every read. Just my honest opinion.
docmaverick

docmaverick

18 years ago

With "no crit"...

....you've done so, in the highest regard. I'm really grateful that somehow, you felt what I wrote. There was alot of emotion written into this piece, and you are so very kind to let me know that you felt it. Thank you, Doc.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years ago

You are welcome

Smiles:) Barbara After reading again the words came {pure at heart} The emotions you express is pure inoncence, it purity embraces me completely. True poet