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To Remedy
You gave me confidence,
You gave me courage
To try again...
To ride again
With the wind, like when I was a child.
There were many horses throughout the years,
But none that measured up to you.
I could trust you, Remedy.
Your willingness and your heart...
Is what set you apart.
On your back, I became one with you.
We defied gravity.
We broke the time barrier...
Or so it seemed.
You were not the fastest.
You were not the biggest.
You were just the best.
You carried small children
On your back for me.
You taught Cowboy Jim
How to ride.
Then you were a gift to me.
We taught each other.
But, nothing lasts forever.
Now, when I am leaving for a show
Or a race...
You still run up and down the fence
Begging me to take you along.
It does not seem fair
That you were the one who was injured.
I'm telling you, Remedy...
That one day you and I
Will race the shooting stars.
We will ride the wind,
Running behind the clouds.
Your knees will not hurt anymore,
And neither will my back.
I have heard some say
That they would never ride a mare.
Well, they were just not blessed...
They were not lucky enough
To have ridden you.
Wolfycat.
Critiques
meic
18 years 5 months ago
Although I’ve never ridden
wolfycat
18 years 5 months ago
She remains special...
IKnowNoBox
18 years 4 months ago
There it is animal husbandry at its finest.
wolfycat
18 years 1 month ago
As always...