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Jan 03, 2008
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Winter Oaks
The undressed oaks of winter
Stretch their fingers to the sky,
Contemplating autumn's end
And sharing silent wintry cries.
Brown leaves have faded to the ground
And back again to dust,
Breaking underneath my feet
Under the frosty crust.
They stand helpless in the bitter cold,
Some bent from ancient storms,
Keeping watch in winter's twilight,
These magestic, dormant forms.
Like the oaks, I now abide
In a haunting, cold embrace.
I, also, long for spring to come
And show its warm, bright face.
Wolfycat
1/3/08
— wolfycat, Jan 03, 2008
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purplemoondoll
18 years 5 months ago
I can see the oaks
wolfycat
18 years 5 months ago
Thanks...
purplemoondoll
18 years 5 months ago
The trees
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
Low on timwe but will return to comment
wolfycat
18 years 5 months ago
Hello Friend!
Mark
18 years 5 months ago
This is when we know
wolfycat
18 years 5 months ago
Thanks, Mark...
Janice Pearce
18 years 5 months ago
Winter Oaks
wolfycat
18 years 5 months ago
Thanks very much...
meic
18 years 5 months ago
Lovely flowing rhythmic
wolfycat
18 years 5 months ago
Thanks again, Mike!
Calliope
18 years 5 months ago
I always...
wolfycat
18 years 5 months ago
Thanks Lacy!
pinksheep
18 years 4 months ago
this poem
wolfycat
18 years 4 months ago
Hello Lesley!
pinksheep
18 years ago
Went
Mark
18 years ago
Followed pinksheep
wolfycat
18 years ago
Pinksheep and Mark...