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theladyblue
theladyblue
Jan 02, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

On High

Why why blue sun Does the rain stop? Why why true noon Does the rain drop? Why why green sky Does the ground crumble? Why why sweet child Does the heart fumble? Why why red balloon Does the ground seem so far?
— theladyblue, Jan 02, 2008

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

lyrical

a simple and melodious piece that makes me think of a child's rhyme. Very pleasant. ~ Ronda
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 5 months ago

Lullaby poetry

that is how you start a child of to reading Doc Suess,Raul Daul,and Then in elementry Shel Silverstein..."dangerous" habit... In ink, dabbler
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

The our house is the danger

The our house is the danger zone! lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

Around here we’ve got it

Around here we've got it all!!! lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie