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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jan 02, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Girl In The Mirror Has No Return

 

Healing is lost to the girl
who has no hearer
she scurry to hide the cries
no one is  listening to

Her  heart ripped apart
can’t be repaired
as her love is no more
her life blood cease to flow

A massive heart attack
her love is whack
No mending for the misery
of sudden affliction


— Barbara Writes, Jan 02, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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purplemoondoll

18 years 5 months ago

Very sad

You illustrated the story well in some short well executed lines. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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amilu

18 years 5 months ago

barbara, I really like the

barbara, I really like the title of this poem....it makes me feel like as if you r watching a reflection of yrslf in the mirror and writing abt that reflection!
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 5 months ago

Thanks

Thanks, I write a lot about me, and also about everything thing I imagine makes a good poem.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 1 month ago

Thanks Mark

Smiles:) Barbara I didn't realize I change to my voice even though I heard me taking while rewriting it. When at first it was me looking in the mirror. If what I said sounds sensible, being aware and not aware. As usual your comments are aways a joy and appreciated.
whitetea

whitetea

17 years 8 months ago

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I admire poetry that gets personal, and especially people that can put their personal experiences forward. I really liked this.