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And Now You Know

Here we are, just you and me,

and it's so comfortable.

You're like a favorite, old sweater.

One that's great for lounging in on a cloudy day.

 

I need for you to know something.

Something that I feel way down deep inside.

I love you for who you are,

for you bring out the parts of me that are good.

 

And I thank you.

I love the way your eyes smile when you laugh,

and I feel your pain when you are down.

You are a shining star.

 

I don't mean to frighten you.

I'm not going anywhere.

I just thought you should know these things,

for they are as real as night will swallow the day.

 

The light of day peeks over the horizon,

ever so slightly, so as not to startle all of us.

We will enter the day as different people, for I have shared,

and you listened.....and now you know.

— docmaverick, Dec 30, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

A deeply sensitive and beautiful work of love.

The line "for they are as real as night will swallow the day." Says so much about what we need to say but often gets left unsaid. Doc, you continue to amaze me lately with the quality of the work you are producing. Don't take that as an insult, its the improvement in your work I have seen. You have found your voice as a poet, as opposed to the lyric writer you were when I first met you. cheers, Jess
docmaverick

docmaverick

18 years 5 months ago

Jess...

..that means alot to me. It was made possible because I really tried to listen, and apply your criticisms. What still is mind-boggling, is the ones I work hardest on, don't get any comments. Then the ones that come easiest do. Now there's the rub...aye? Later, doc.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Apply for Advocacy.

You might feel un-qualified but you are qualified. You have been a valuable member of this site for a long time. Time to give some back. I can think of several new members who would gain from your insights. When the site was much smaller people like Joe, me and IknowNoBox carried it by their daily commitment. We need more now. Just fill out the form man, its no big deal. You will get more comments when you make more comments. Easy arithmetic. I have had trouble keeping up lately because there is just so bloody much getting posted. If there is anything I've missed that you want feedback on, just message me. cheers, Jess