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IKnowNoBox
Dec 27, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

What Happened Then

 Make believe phantasms

 pseudo-apparitions

 spectral vaporous

pale between realms

casters of dimmed life

sacred reminders

memories in mist

ectoplasmic

chimeric geist

passive spirits

echoed images

untethered souls

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Dec 27, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Very fucking scary man!

I honestly felt shivers and the hairs on the back of my neck raising while i read it. Subtlety yet brutally powerful stuff. cheers, Jess
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

There are several, but tend

There are several, but tend to be shaggy dog, not easily compressed to verse. If you can get your hands on it watch the '70s Aussie movie "Picnic at Hanging Rock" very spooky, no horror. cheers, Jess