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A Puppy and my Angel

A Puppy and my Angel

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It is a balck day with a heavy rain

the floors and walls are too cold and wet

My tongue prays for a cup hot tea

for that i went  to a shop  to get a pocket milk

On the way to shop I met a pup on that road

with shivering and hunger to have a care

My mind runs on that pup and

ordered to pick it up to give a shelter and food

My parents and old showing their hatred on it

only my sweet Angel took it with love

She begins to weep on seeing it's shivering and

gave her old balnket to it for it's recovery

She shared her milk with that pup

when it regains it's normalcy ,she laughs ..laughs

SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 26, 2007

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barbsdad2003

18 years 5 months ago

Oh, Ravi:

A startlingly refreshing piece. I think (and not to overstate) it's my favorite of all those I've seen of yours. Thanx, Grandpa