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themoonman
themoonman
Dec 25, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Moments

A darker moment.

Mostly they pass and get stacked on the

crushing shelf in my mind full of things.

News flash...

an innocent smile makes me think of all the

times I could have said I love you.

Brackets and Angles.

I try to sturdy the load.

But the view overwhelms me...

and I let go.

Help...

Help me see.

Then the moment passes

and I steady for more.

— themoonman, Dec 25, 2007

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

moments! beautiful

wonderfully written your poem speaks loud and clear to me ,as we all have moments when we are not sure about everything shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Richard and Shirley

Shirley thanks for drawing my attention to this one and Richard i would repost this its a really really good poem hun love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

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