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A Leader

Budget cuts, enviromental mishaps.

Queer atmospheric changes.

Misused words.

Confusion's shots are fired.
 

Is it human nature to herd,

and be part of the herd...

and if you are not, are you a deviant,

or an eccentric...

and who decides?
 

If we collectively hate an entire culture,

does it unify us or confuse us further...

divisions, hatred's seeds are spread.
 

Are you a Leader,

are there any among us,

are they leading us over the cliff,

do we deserve this dumbass shit?


— themoonman, Dec 23, 2007

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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purplemoondoll

18 years 5 months ago

Wow

This shoots from the hip and raises some very provocative questions. I like the structure and flow. It reminds me of my degree studies - Social Policy. The same questions were raised and my answers were at the time and still are those who hold power decide what is or isnt deviant. Those who question the status quo for a good reason can find themselves being classes as being deviant wihout good cause. The eternal problem is that sometimes those who stand supposedly to uphold the 'pillars of virtue' - whatever that means - are deviant themselves or caught up in beaurocracy and the political dance too much - often to the detriment of those who cannot fight back - and that will always make me angry - with good reason! Nice work. :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 5 months ago

Hi

Hi Kaz, your comment is much better than the poem.... thank you. Richard
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southern_voice15

18 years 5 months ago

Love is being stupid

Love is being stupid together. ~Paul Valery this captures perfectly the affect of conforming, and how no one stands out anymnore.
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Ink Dragon

17 years 4 months ago

Richard,

this is your angry self speaking. I can see how much this subject angers you. It´s a wonderful and honest poem. Your structure, alternating statements and questions, is more than suitable. Awesome, ~Nina P.S. Have you ever read my poem "solitude"? It´s about a stray sheep. I feel a connection between these two, your poem and mine...
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

Ink...

yes, my angry self... and anger can be truly inspiring... this one is from long ago, amazing how it still fits in our world of today... Solitude... I can't remember reading it, but I will surely look it up... thanks for reading Nina... Richard