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Erinyes

from the alley like a ghost

she wends her way into the fog

where no one differentiates

the contrast of alabaster skin against the mist

while evil gets a lucid view of the crumbling variance

between the iniquity and innocence of the human race

                                                

gliding fluidly through the streets

amongst lost souls that haunt the night

who whisper that this must be an angel sent from heaven

while she hides her diablerie beneath a sheath of silver hair

nefarious intentions disguised with the mask of a seraph

 

to meet her eyes is madness

hundreds have drowned within their cerulean depths

eternally lost beneath the lengths of her ebony lashes

for all the ethereal beauty that possesses her is but a masquerade

veiling malicious intentions beyond her restraint

 

prowling shadows like desolation

stealth a sense defending her against destruction

from prey who sometimes roar like lions

before she sacrifices them like lambs

Murmuring as she drains them

“Yes, beloved…”

 

pulses flutter wildly against her teeth and lips

as panic consumes them in the face of their own mortality

she attempts to allow sentiment and grace in their expiration

bestowing death upon them with the last kiss

they will ever know upon this earth

 

some welcome her like serenity

some struggle like insanity

despite their sinful transgressions

she cannot help but cherish them all

 

hunting with the cycle of the moon

waxing and waning in the evening sky

while blood flows between each visceral embrace

consuming the darkened realms of a demon's heart

offering the only soul she may ever know

— RSScheerer, Dec 21, 2007

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Near Springfield, Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Edgar Allen Poe, Merrit Malloy

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orgami

18 years 5 months ago

the vial of valiance the sins of salient

i must say i Love Vampire movies having been terrified 0f them as a child and walked in Toronto canada in the early eightes and seeing the then early early goths english horror was the only foreshadowing of the greater stories to follow yet i read Poe and Lovecraft and others and found no connection I must say I so salivate when i read this i shall sharpen my dog teeth in honour Bravo Bravo Bravo
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

*bows*

Thank you, O. I have always been partial to the dark and interesting side of things, so a poem regarding vampires is only natural. Still, it wasn't easy. Although I love to read horror and the like, writing it is a relatively unexplored world for me. Your reviews are like your poetry. Original and satisfying. ~ Ronda
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meic

18 years 5 months ago

This [imo] beautifully

This [imo] beautifully written piece touches on a long-time fascination of mine with the Furies, Succubi and other mythological - and predatory women. Hopefully, for the most part, they currently sleep: Go away from my window Go away from my door Don't want to see you Hanging round here anymore Well, you used to be a comfort When I needed to believe But the furies are in heaven tonight And the sandman's in the sea And I never heard of anything that I didn't half believe And the furies are in heaven tonight And the sandman's in the sea Aerial photo of my down-to-earth life Your falling star shone in my telescopic sight Man is always in the moon And no woman can be free And the furies are in heaven tonight And the sandman's in the sea ~ Melanie Safka ~ SANDMAN. Though I do think the spirit lives on in some mortal women - and to my cost I find them irresistible: In the briefest of glittering glances I spy the shards in her eyes. Crystalline inclusions in the ice-blue iris; vitreous splinters rip-reflecting, slash-refracting; scatter spitting pyrotechnic slivers of shattered psychic spectra shredded sensations and scattered semblances of sybaritic reality. Amid the debris of these clinical incisions: reflected? Yes; refracted? Yes I perceive a passing glimpse of reconstructed ancient cruelties past born and present pressed into servile slavery. Her intent is cut glass clear. In that mere second’s glance, less any scintillating second chance, there were shards in her eyes and one of them was me. ~ Meic ~ SHARDS IN HER EYES Write on, Poet, and I'll read. PS Have a couple of attempts at Succubi on my art site [see below] if you're curious. Mike Photo: Me, early 50s - just after winning the resort Disco dancing competition.[!!] For my own orginal graphic art please visit: http://www.flickr.com/photos/7911705@N07
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

my thanks

It is truly an honor when the review contains as much imagery as the piece that is being reviewed. Thank you for such beautiful words. ~ Ronda
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barbsdad2003

18 years 5 months ago

You ...

sink so well into the worlds of flickered shadows, of fleeting intuition, of primal states. Mesmerizing. Spellbinding. Hypnotic. Dreamy. Thanx, Chuck
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

Thank you, Chuck

It would appear that these are the sorts of places I find myself most comfortable. ~ Ronda
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 5 months ago

With this suspense tone

that is something to note have read that very little in poems.A skill to blend the shades of shadow in painting alone.with words...
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Calliope

18 years 4 months ago

Apparently ...

...I'm not the only one drawn to the darker side.i am An obssesive vampire fan and this would be a great novel .The way you write I think you could do it. this was ....I'm speechless! Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

You're right, Lacy

I was thinking the same thing as I read your work; we seem to share a tendency to lean towards the darker side of things. Maybe it's the bipolar. I'm flattered by your suggestion of making Erinyes a novel. I'm not sure what else I could say about her, though! Maybe one day. Thank you so much ~ Ronda
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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Ronda,

this piece of yours should be in the Vampire Chronicles! I love it! Nearly speechless, Ink
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you, Ink!

Unfortunately, haven't found an acceptance for this one yet, but plan to keep trying! I love the Vampire Chronicles ... well, until they got way off the plot. To be compared to them is flattering! ~ Ronda
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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Ronda,

I know what you mean about the Vampire Chronicles getting way off the plot, I, too, lost it after volume 4. But I have read "Blood and Gold" recently (had been given it as a birthday present), and I think Anne Rice has kind of found her plot again... Your poem reminded me of Pandora. Love, Ink
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 5 months ago

Ink

I didn't know about "Blood and Gold" but will have to check for it now! I thought Anne Rice was only writing Christian novels now. She had really begun leaning that way by the end of the Vampire Chronicles, I think. Funny you should mention Pandora. It was my user name when I began using the internet in 1999. It wasn't until later in 2000 I became "moongate" nearly everywhere. Here, of course, I decided to use my initials. This is the first place I've not gone "incognito!" *lol* ~ Ronda