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requiem

If you come to me as softly

as the wind between the trees

perhaps we may perceive of faith

and know what sorrow sees

 

If you approach as lightly

as the morning threading dew

I shall embrace your advent

and ask nothing more of you

 

If you only join me silently

soundless as bated breath

then only those remaining dead

shall true remember death

 

If you appear in subtle tones

in different shades and hues

I will recognize our memories

beneath the greens and blues

 

We shall hold each other tenderly

through our contrasted years

as the unforgiving earth between us

absorbs a thousand tears

— RSScheerer, Dec 21, 2007

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Region, Country: Near Springfield, Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Edgar Allen Poe, Merrit Malloy

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

I received a most unusual compliment on this piece

I sent it to a friend Saturday (she's often referred to as one of my strongest muses). She took my words and created such a beautiful song; I couldn't believe it when she sent me the recording. Rhyme and I do not meet often, but this would have to be one of my personal favorites if I had to choose from my own work. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~ Ronda
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

Find a way

Come up with a way and I'd be glad to let you hear. She did a beautiful job of it.
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pinksheep

18 years 5 months ago

Requiem

This poem has God like sensitivity , with its lyrical quality you have guided me onto a path that will enable me to think more about life, a path I admit I am a little afraid to take, though extremely happy that you have taken me to this path. Lesley
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

thank you Lesley

I always enjoy hearing readers' interpretations of poetry. Thank you for your kind words. ~ Ronda
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Patthepoet

18 years 5 months ago

Requiem

This is a lovely poem, and since most of my poems do rhyme, I especially enjoyed this. I find that not very many poets write with rhyme these days, but this was exceptional.I especially liked the last verse in its entire form. You do an excellent job getting your ideas across. Thanks for sharing and have a great month. Pat.
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Calliope

18 years 4 months ago

I as well...

..rather ryme.I like the flow of the words as they slip off the toungue.This was a beautiful write.Only one mistake,if it is that, you wrote shall true remember death,to me it should be truly,it interrupts the flow ,otherwise it is a soft and sensual peice. The repetition of words worked on a level I love. Brava! Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

I'm sure there was a reason

...for me to use "true" there, but for the life of me I couldn't explain it now! Your comments are "truly" appreciated! ;) ~ Ronda