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THIS CREATOR

THIS CREATOR

This creator is an enigma:
irrational perhaps,
full of maybes, could-bes, perhapses.
Could we halt his creations?
Sling some tempered steel
to the turning wheel?

Ask no questions on that score
all the answers are mislaid memories
slunk back along the anxious alleyways
and the febrile footpaths of time.

This creator is a restorer of lost pictures
a reminder of wings and beauty
peril and glee
of whom we once were
and who we will be.
And singing, singing
celebrates impermanence
as much as all eternity.

Once [or twice, or thrice] upon a time
he traced a sign
within the virgin sand
and, despite his crisp denials,
water glistened in the tracks
of his finger's glide …
and somewhere
along this cold wet wall
the mind-child,
man-child sighed
and wrote his name.

Creation hurts.
this creator cannot save us
but makes us worth saving;
makes our passing mourned
and, almost as an afterthought,
his own.

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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

This creator is an enigma

That's true, hence the myriad of stories and legends about the creation of this world and the human race. I like that opening line and even better I like the way you have avoided a Christiam slant to this piece so it could appeal to all faiths. It's an intelligent piece of writing. You have used some breathtaking phrases and imagery in this piece Meic. I really enjoy reading your work and can see why Mark was inspired. Please can I include this one on the site? Thanks. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 4 months ago

Staggeringly Beautiful ...

I second kaz. If I could say it better without unseemly gushing, I would. Thanx once again, Chuck PS: To borrow from American baseball, on rare occasions you may strike (actually, I can't think of any); otherwise you hit home runs.