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Dec 22, 2007
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Through the eyes of a child
When I was young
As yet unsung
Every word I wrote
I thought was fit to quote
Every stanza, a bonanza
With every poem and every song
I felt that I could do no wrong
I was the master
I was the kingThere was no winter, only spring
Now the times, they have changed
And my thoughts have rearranged
Now all my work goes through a prism
Through the mill of criticism
Now every stroke and every tap
Seem to me just like crap
I wish, I wish, I wish I might
See my work in a different light
I think I could halt my demise
If I could see my work through different eyes
It would not be so reviled
If I could see my work through the eyes of a child
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