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Through the eyes of a child

When I was young

As yet unsung

Every word I wrote

I thought was fit to quote

Every stanza, a bonanza

With every poem and every song 

I felt that I could do no wrong

 

I was the master 

I was the kingThere was no winter, only spring

 

Now the times, they have changed 

And my thoughts have rearranged

Now all my work goes through a prism

 

 Through the mill of criticism

 Now every stroke and every tap

 Seem to me just like crap

 

I wish, I wish, I wish I might 

 See my work in a different light

 

I think I could halt my demise

 If   I could see my work through different eyes

 It would not be so reviled

If I could see my work through the eyes of a child

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Patthepoet

18 years 4 months ago

"Through the Eyes of a Child" comments

Mike, this is a lovely poem, and although I am not a child, I will give your some positive comments. I love rhyming poems. The story in the poem is well thought out, the imagery is good, the self criticism too harsh. I find your poems very enjoyable. Maybe I'm too easy to please, but I don't think so. Thanks for sharing this great poem.