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Part 2: Charlie
Charlie was the latest of his late-season
clutch to hatch, his older siblings by now
having come full-fledged adults who looked
exactly like all other mature sparrows.
Well, hold on. That's not completely true.
Let me recast: His brothers looked like
adult males, his sisters adult females.
There were obvious gender differences.
Charlie himself, however, was just
shy of mature. His markings weren't
as bold as those of older male sparrows.
Except for when he begged for beak-to-beak
feeding from any nearby grownup,
his entreating wings flaring downward,
outer feathers all atwitter, he kept both wings
nestled in their at-rest fluffy positions
against his sides. By doing so so habitually,
he kept them, unfortunately, short of prime
condition for flying.
When a warning, one made sufficiently plain
to engage Charlie's attention, was activated
by someone (or someones) of his extended family---
as the startled flock made good their own
off-the-deck whirring launch---he would by himself
hop as swiftly as his spindly legs could go,
sometimes breaking into an actual twinkle-toed
scurry, until he got to a mostly safe hiding place
amongst motley grasses or under the low branches
of a close-by ground-squatting dwarf evergreen.
After more than a reasonably lengthy spell,
he'd sneak a peek; then, if he deemed the coast
sufficiently clear, Charlie would venture a hopping,
zigzagging scenic route back to the deck proper,
there to recommence his desultory lonesome picking
at sunflower and other birdseed leftovers.
He'd make his way apprehensively. It was as if he were
checking---or rechecking---water temperature
with his big toe before plunging in.
Big toe, of course, being somewhat of a metaphor,
since nothing about Charlie was big.
(to be continued in Part 3)
Comments
purplemoondoll
18 years 4 months ago
A late developer?