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Dec 18, 2007
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Coming from Hell Smoking
Running Red Lights all the way
Echoes of "Get the Fuck Out."
follow with a stench of sulfur
look as close as you dare
for a smirk upon the face
of the very soul that pissed
in the River of Styx fouling it
attitude so intense that
even Death got a twist
in his velvety knickers
without a doubt now
there is no realm
to hold this grotesque
abomination
Right under the noses
of the masses something
BETTER THEN EVIL BECAME!
ignored it grew eating fear
and comparing notes
this thing is bored by "evil"
— IKnowNoBox, Dec 18, 2007
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meic
18 years 5 months ago
For me emptiness, absence is
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
Death with knickers....
Vasyl Puzanov
18 years 5 months ago
Oh! Such a truthful poem!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
Thank you Vasyl.
purplemoondoll
18 years 5 months ago
Awesome
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
I have a short story in my head
RSScheerer
18 years 5 months ago
clever and raw
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
Welcome Back Ronda
RSScheerer
18 years 5 months ago
It's a relative term
themoonman
18 years 5 months ago
Wow
Patthepoet
18 years 5 months ago
comments on "Coming from Hell Smoking"
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
Humor with a twist sinister
RSScheerer
18 years 5 months ago
I'm not sure about "common"