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Dec 18, 2007
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Paste Gem
there my friend is set in real gold
a gem that shines from a distance
everything fades in comparison
one would spend a fortune
even for a hope to hold it
there my friend is snake oil
a sweet addictive elixir at first sip
a shot of vitality blushes through you
one would believe at first taste
until you taste paste...
— IKnowNoBox, Dec 18, 2007
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