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Part 2: Now Quite the Turtle Tale
Precious minutes prior,
in my best beggar's voice,
I shamelessly implored her then
to tell me something apropos
concerning olden happier
days gone quite well by.
She, having lived much longer
than unartful I, indeed had much,
I thought, to teach me ...
and to advise me ... all about
the mystic secrets that
assured a long, quite healthy life.
But only if perchance could lie
that she should come so quite inclined!
A fresh-from-babyhood---
that, except for gleaming fur,
glossed dark as charcoaled coal---
black squirrel played right
nearly quite to highest peak
of spreading hefty creekside oak ...
and then he spiraled down
and round, then up oak's trunk,
and sped quite ziggedly-
zaggedly clear to breeze-
blown tips of gently skirting,
well-leaved, green-dressed
curving branches (so like
monkey bars for one like agile him)---
and skirred quite back again---
while dancing, prancing ...
and, yes, even chittering to himself.
And taking wondrous notice
of such rushing nonsense
acts of patent, so apparent ecstasy,
Old Plumbrook Turtle swiveled
slightly bulbous head to gaze,
in leisurely fashion, for long moments quite up,
blinking in the briskly coolish morning sun.
Way up she looked.
And probably, by so doing,
I suppose did make herself quite dizzy.
All the while I tarried, filled
to slopping rim with expectation,
chronic hopes held, fluttering
in the gentle drafts so like a flag
unblemished held quite boldly high.
As I waited patiently, quite,
I'm most proud to say.
The while in secret, hidden hoping
Plumbrook Turtle had not put me quite yet
just then out of mind.
At least not quite.
(to be continued in Part 3)
Comments
meic
18 years 4 months ago
Part 2 certainly continues
purplemoondoll
18 years 4 months ago
Part One was Good
weirdelf
18 years 4 months ago
Chuck, this is a major work
barbsdad2003
18 years 4 months ago
I'm Delighted to Inform You That ...