thomassbaby

Dec 20, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Women To Be Free Again

why should i let it bother me

you are just a guy

you used me for my money

and now i wish you would die

i am sick of guys treating girls like trash

they should be banned from the world

us women shouldnt be treated like that

let alone abused, raped or hurt

us women shouldnt have to suffer

the men should have to pay

for they have hurt us to many times

and its time they learn its not right

guys that hurt women are assholes

and they should be put away

no one should be used

and today i am going to pray

that all men in this world

would get some common sense

to know what is right and wrong

so women can be free again

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meic

18 years 4 months ago

That’s telling ‘em -

That's telling 'em - more power to your pen. Thank God we're not all the same. Mike Photo: Me in my forties - face furniture, version 3. Passport photo - Mafia? For my own orginal graphic art please visit: http://www.flickr.com/photos/7911705@N07

thomassbaby

18 years 4 months ago

i kno guys are not all the

i kno guys are not all the same but there are alot out there that hurt women and someone needs to take a stand soon i have seen people get hurt i have been hurt and i dont want to deal with it anyone my little sister got hurt today a guy had told her to go kill herself that no one cares those are the kind of guys i really hate and they should seriously be put in there place

purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

Packs a Punch

In all the right places. Wow I like the way you shoot from the hip with this poem. It shows strength and attitude. Well done. As Meic rightly says thank god not all men are the same. :-) I look forward to seeing more of your work. Best wishes Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

thomassbaby

18 years 4 months ago

thank you for the support

thank you for the support and if it affended anyone at first i am sorry but right now guys are not on my best list right now but i do know there are not that many guys that treat girls like trash i just wish guys would learn that its not right to do that. us women have a right to be happy and not be hurt and our bodies are ours and guys shouldnt abuse us its not right but thanxs for the comment it means alot crazygirl69

purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

Writing is

A brilliant antidote to anger. It shows strength of character and a healthy attitude. What goes around comes around they say. Most guys I know who treat women like this get all they deserve in the long run and lead lonely, meaningless lives. Lets hope it is the case here. Best wishes Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

weirdelf

18 years 4 months ago

As a male I applaude you

This is an important poem and needed to be written. We think we all have equal rights but that is transparently not true, especially to do with power and how it is used. But I beg you to consider the other side. The men who treat women badly lose, they will only mate with destroyed women, and will hate them worse. Some of us know better. cheers, Jess wishing you a Salubrious Solstice

thomassbaby

18 years 4 months ago

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thank you i kno tht it needed to be written and it was only written out of pure anger i was pissed off at my ex boyfriend becuz of this huge fight we got into and yes things are better between me and him now and i appreciate all the support i am getting from this poem crazygirl69