thomassbaby

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HELP ME

DARK AS DARK

AS DARK CAN BE

CAN THIS BE TRUE

CAN THIS BE ME

DEEPER DARKER

HARDER TO SEE

NOTHING IS RIGHT

AS EVERYONE THINKS

THAT IT SHOULD BE

TERROR CREEPS AROUND

SNEEKS UP ON ME

SCARING ME

TERRORIZING HAUNTING ME

CANNOT SLEEP

NEVER WANT OT EAT

FED UP WITH LIFE

JUST LIKE ME

WANTING TO BE NORMAL

LIKE OTHER HUMAN BEINGS

WISHING LIFE WAS BETTER

BETTER THAN IT CAN BE

SCARE ME BARE ME

TERRORIZE ME

NO ONE SHOULD SUFFER

AS MUCH AS ME

I HOPE IT WORKS

OUT TO BE

NOT DARKER NOR DEEPER

PLEASE OH PLEASE

OH PLEASE HELP ME

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Lex_Le Belle M…

18 years 4 months ago

Wow

That was quite a moving and amazing piece. I felt as if I was looking in on myself. That was amazing. It took me back to a certain time in my life...beautifully and heartbreakingly written...brava... bowing ever gracefully, The muse

thomassbaby

18 years 4 months ago

thanx

thanx i wrote that when i was in 7th grade i am now a junior in high school i have had a rough past so it was coming from inside my heart when i wrote that

Jillian Botha

18 years 4 months ago

A very brave and open write!!

Hi Crazygirl I can relate, and you are a very brave soul to bare you inner emotions to us like this. BRAVO!! Hope things brighten up for you soon though! Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)

thomassbaby

18 years 4 months ago

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hey i will take that advice its kinda nice to know that people like my work i had also wrote a few other poems i have been writing for a long time and that poem i wrote in 7th grade....but things have cleared up some but i still have issues to deal with but thanxs for the advice

thomassbaby

18 years 4 months ago

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yes this is what has happened to me personally that is wat all my poems are about are personal things