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Drifting Away

Dancing in the night

Far out of sight

Wondering what to do with my life

Thinking of the days

Passing my life away

Sick and alone

Dizzy yet unknown

Fighting for my rights

Changing all i want to do

But drifting far away from you.

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ngaio c.beck

18 years 4 months ago

Drifting

ngaio c.beck A lot of feeling in so few words.Poignant.
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ngaio c.beck

18 years 4 months ago

Drifting Away

ngaio c.beck Mdms, I meant Though the work was well written,it has more than a fatalistic tinge of sadness,(for a young lady with the Nom/de/Plu,"crazy girl 69". I am a dark poet,and I know. Ngaio Beck