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Part 1: Now Quite the Turtle Tale
"Once ... up ... on ... a ... time,"
Old Plumbrook Turtle started fitfully,
with considerable strain and at unhurried pace,
quite after which she paused
to shift her bulk of portly weight
from right side creaking quite to leftward.
With ponderously quite calculated thought,
with care she contemplated
her next words, so thereby choosing
midst the many possible open to her.
By her chosen movement, she settled then her bent
and domish body for to rest quite slablike on the even larger,
sandy-beige quite crooked rock
that jutted over water from midslope aslant
above the flatland's muddy creek's so quite
confining border.
Deep fluid, bold-browned, in color very like quite
syruped cream of softly rippling chocolate,
muddled past beneath on its sedate meander
eastward with a mind quite obviously
fixed well on traveling somewhere else.
And so proceeding slowly.
Quite.
She looked at me quite languidly,
blinking in the streaming sunlight, as if to say,
"And what, I ask, might you be doing here?"
But---but!---of course she knew,
I knew, quite then (and even now) already.
(to be continued in Part 2)
Comments
meic
18 years 4 months ago
I’m completely spellbound.
purplemoondoll
18 years 4 months ago
This is Incredible Poetry