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IKnowNoBox
Dec 15, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

DUH!!!

Does The Word Dynamite

Mean anything to you

T.N.T.???

 

That Wire is Electric

the yellow hazard tape

is a give away  warning!

 

So have you been to the mall

to leave your valuables

out in the open?

— IKnowNoBox, Dec 15, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 5 months ago

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ummm, im lost.....
Mark

Mark

18 years 5 months ago

Duh !!!

Please don't tell me you did that? I would not advise putting them in such a place in such a place Duh!!!
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 4 months ago

I'm with tears on this I think an open line

or an opener At the mall can you see the signs Duh!It's going places I just did not see where you came from but did see where you were going Donnie/Sinbad maybe even "Stolen" or some other single word opener Lifted Snatch I'm shure youll find it and re fine it or define it Your present time emotion may have got in the way of the pure thought process It happens I do like Duh! Hommer was he not a great poet simpson I mean hehe