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ROOTED

Though the wilder winds within
have gentled in the years
and the bitter bile has dried
I still endure.

Though the tender tissues
no longer tingle at the slightest touch
and my rind is bleached bone-white
I am rooted still.

My roots are deep
tight tangled in the mothering earth
and the still rising sap succours and swells
fast flourishing foliage
brave against the world’s weathers.

Though my fierce face is raised
to resist the shocks of storms,
I have learned to bend beside the wind
but I will not break.

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I saw this tree against the skyline atop the sand dunes on the north-west cost of Jersey [Channel Islands, UK]. The tree was growing almost horizontally because of the strength of the prevailing winds - the windward side sand-blasted bare of bark and leaves, but the leeward side with full luxuriant foliage. A tree to live up to, methinks.

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Ancientone

18 years 4 months ago

Strong roots.....

do bend, but it takes a mighty storm to uproot them. The horizontal tree captures the spirit of which your poem beseeches thee and others. Nicely versed my poet friend. :) Patrick/AO
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 3 months ago

Rooted

beautifully written isn't it great when the small details in life can create a masterpiece?
Mark

Mark

18 years 3 months ago

Meaning

When the wind moves the rock over the seed it will still sprout and grow distorted but soon it will reach for the light and continue to grow maybe not so perfect but nontheless can be pleasing and pleased like a life interrupted there is still beauty in it. How many lives start with interruptions? Alot. I'm with you on admiring the life that survives constant interruption :)
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purplemoondoll

18 years 3 months ago

I was walking in the woods

I was walking in the woods this morning as the sun came up. We had fierce winds and heavy rain last night and this poem captured the scene exactly. Though my fierce face is raised to resist the shocks of storms, I have learned to bend beside the wind but I will not break. Trees have their own wisdom - this is beautiful writing my friend. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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Tuffroc

18 years 3 months ago

Well rooted

"...brave against the world's weathers....bend besides the wind but I will not break". Nice motivation for those who feel down and out