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The Magic

I read a fable as a child,

and the lore was enticing.

It taught me to clutch reality more tightly,

and I learned my place amongst today.

 

I smelled the sweetest scent of a rose,

and it's hue was of the deepest red.

I lost myself in the gaze.

 

I meant not, to steal away it's color...

..yet, I ruined every petal with my gaze.

 

I heard a songbird sing.

I tried to capture it in my heart,

I yearned for the very essence of it's song.

 

I meant not, to steal it's voice...

..yet, I yearned to take it home.

 

Now, I realize.

I've tried to steal away the magic.

 

By trying to take it home,

one cannot pocket away the rainbow.

It's far better to share a fraction of the magic...

..than it's whole. 

— docmaverick, Dec 12, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

A rousing cheer!

Doc this piece rings of classic romanticism. Yet another burst of growth in you as a poet. A poets poem, while still being wholly accessible, and resonates with sub-particle physics (the Heisenberg principle, the observer affects), you may not have intended that, but bloody brilliant! cheers, Jess wishing you a Salubrious Solstice