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Dec 12, 2007
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The Magic
I read a fable as a child,
and the lore was enticing.
It taught me to clutch reality more tightly,
and I learned my place amongst today.
I smelled the sweetest scent of a rose,
and it's hue was of the deepest red.
I lost myself in the gaze.
I meant not, to steal away it's color...
..yet, I ruined every petal with my gaze.
I heard a songbird sing.
I tried to capture it in my heart,
I yearned for the very essence of it's song.
I meant not, to steal it's voice...
..yet, I yearned to take it home.
Now, I realize.
I've tried to steal away the magic.
By trying to take it home,
one cannot pocket away the rainbow.
It's far better to share a fraction of the magic...
..than it's whole.
— docmaverick, Dec 12, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 5 months ago
A rousing cheer!