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Dec 15, 2007
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Critic's Corner: She's All Thumbs, Gee Whiz!
Although she owns a full two ears
in well-fixed place aside her smallish head
that lies upon yon pillow
in her unmade mattressed bed,
I do not think that shrew
nigh right well hears.
Although she plays the drums
for no-grained breads,
and scattered crumbs
in front of big-mall Sears,
she plays them with all thumbs
the while she furious sneers.
Whatever she might think
she ready sees
must fly with all nights'
all-blight breeze
in trendy seas.
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Do not! mind what!
she does or says---
or says she does or says,
or says she says she does or says---
she does not---
will not!---
grasp her ABCs.
Comments
Mark
18 years 4 months ago
I get the feeling
meic
18 years 4 months ago
A thoroughly entertaining
IKnowNoBox
18 years 4 months ago
The mall here brings us the "Cat Killer"...