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Dec 13, 2007
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SHADOWS
SHADOWS
Shadows cast by daffodils
black against the wall
motionless
Outside
a feather lost by a lone and migrant bird
floating downwards
Inside
silhouettes of daffodils darken, darken
and thoughts like unexpected feathers
forever fall
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Comments
barbsdad2003
18 years 4 months ago
Very haiku; at least so it reminds me ...
themoonman
18 years 4 months ago
Flows