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theladyblue
theladyblue
Dec 08, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Blood Lust

I fear only the craving The intense shock of you Your scent…heady, Strong And fangs sharpen the idea The thought of you and I Your smile…constant, Fatal Reserved skin comes too close Stirring my essence Your touch…agile, Fierce I dread only your absence Parting poisons anticipation Our eternity…dark, Prevailing
— theladyblue, Dec 08, 2007

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meic

18 years 6 months ago

Intense and moving as ever -

Intense and moving as ever - the ellipses and word pairs at the end of each stanza function beautifully as summary/preface. Brilliant linkage, my friend. Mike
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

why thank you!!! i always

why thank you!!! i always get worried about doing the word pairs and such...for fear that they may be a bit cliche' but whats life without living on the edge lol "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie