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Dec 12, 2007
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First Blood
Sweet five year-oldJust killed a bearHis granddad feels prideI just feel despair I don't knowI just shrugOnce he was a bearNow, he'll be a rug Culling the herdsAre words we often hearBut, he was a top predatorHe wasn't a deer Some think it's goodTo teach our children blood lustBut, as far as I'm concernedI just feel disgust I know some feelThat hunting is shrewdBut, I think it's immoralIf you don't need the food When a lack of judgment Is so apparent A license should be required To be a parent His granddad taught himHe must kill to stand tallBut, I hope in twelve yearsWe won't meet him in a mall! He will have some storiesAbout some real whoppersBut, I hope he doesn’t graduateFrom bears to shoppers! His parents will tell youThey did all they couldBut, you should never teach a five year-oldThat killing is good!
Comments
reccaman
18 years 5 months ago
Very good title, it has a
weirdelf
18 years 4 months ago
Utterly applaude the ideas expressed.
barbsdad2003
18 years 4 months ago
Jess: