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Desolate Shake (an inventation to a collaboration)

fancy down and out

nearly worthless refuse

characristics of a relite butt

scattered about bottles

each one has stolen

untended worry

from a vagrents soul

 

determined without

nearly discarded refuse

characteristics of pizza crust

bottles scattered about

each one has given

unintended sorrow

to a deralict soul

 

another fall-out

nearly recycled rubbish

characteristics of aluminuim

cash for bottles

....

(can ya' spare a verse?Poet?Can this poem be redemed?Spare a Stanza?)

 

 

 

 

— IKnowNoBox, Dec 04, 2007

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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cricket

18 years 6 months ago

liked it

this was very interesting for sure... but well written friend. can you tell me if ur having trouble getting in live chat.. I've tried 4 times now.. cricket
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TheRealTearsICry

18 years 6 months ago

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i loved the line(s:each one has stolen untended worry..... awesome poem. ~~~RealTears
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 6 months ago

Thank you

I had a hard time finishing this one...I get shivers when zI try .I have never been that down and that makes it a good thing i couldn't finish it. In ink, David