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Dec 04, 2007
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You, Me And Old Winter
we lay together
limbs enmeshed
our shared and panting breath
so cool upon our fading ecstasy
while outside,
beyond the fragile walls of home
Old Winter cared enough
to pile his frozen drifts
of snowflake joys against
our frost-rimed windowpanes
and ice-bound frozen doors
to hide our aftermath of love
from lonely prying eyes
and keep us sheltered safe within
a golden skein of furnace warmth
who dares to say Old Winter is my enemy?
for while a cold and cruelly uncaring death
awaits beyond the confines of our tenuous
and sheltered warmth for those
who unsuspecting march into
his unforgiving, cold embrace,
for you and I
his soft, deep wind-borne drifts against
our frost-imprisoned home are precious
sacred gifts for they keep us
walled away inside and thus
they keep you here,
entwined,
with me.
limbs enmeshed
our shared and panting breath
so cool upon our fading ecstasy
while outside,
beyond the fragile walls of home
Old Winter cared enough
to pile his frozen drifts
of snowflake joys against
our frost-rimed windowpanes
and ice-bound frozen doors
to hide our aftermath of love
from lonely prying eyes
and keep us sheltered safe within
a golden skein of furnace warmth
who dares to say Old Winter is my enemy?
for while a cold and cruelly uncaring death
awaits beyond the confines of our tenuous
and sheltered warmth for those
who unsuspecting march into
his unforgiving, cold embrace,
for you and I
his soft, deep wind-borne drifts against
our frost-imprisoned home are precious
sacred gifts for they keep us
walled away inside and thus
they keep you here,
entwined,
with me.
— Race_9togo, Dec 04, 2007
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DDCdogood
18 years 6 months ago
Great Read, Crystal Clear
easylife_2
17 years 5 months ago
This is a joy to read
Race_9togo
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks easy, glad you enjoyed it.
Jinxed
17 years 5 months ago
a great poem that was very
Race_9togo
17 years 5 months ago
Jinxed
KambateSpike
17 years 3 months ago
great stuff!
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Spike
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 3 months ago
Race_9Togo
Race_9togo
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Mohammad